Monday, April 6, 2020
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Today i wanted to do a gob for some money. So me and mum and dad went for a walk with our dog and i asked dad if i could do a job and he said OK why don't you clean the pavers. So when i got home i did eleven pavers then i had lunch and then i went up stairs and asked dad if i could go on fortnite. and dad said if you do atles five lines of you'r blog and i said OK. And now mum is doing the job. and wihle i was doing the the job the cold water was boncing off the pavers like littel spakes going on my feet.
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Hi Archie,
ReplyDeleteCleaning the pavers is a great job and you did eleven. Are they big pavers? How many are there altogether. That was a good idea of Dad's to have a goal of writing five lines.
Remember to use the shift key to get a capital I in your writing. Good luck on Fortnite.
Mrs Roach
Hi Archie - good to see you do some writing today. I love your last sentence "the cold water was bouncing off the pavers like little sparks going on my feet" - this is painting a picture with words - well done!
ReplyDeleteAre you enjoying having more time sat home? Write at lest 5 lines to let me know what you are enjoying most.
good job. Zoe
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